Feedback Needed: Does This WhatsApp Offer Sound Clear Enough? š§
Hey guys, Iām working on my offer and Iām not sure if Iām overthinking it š¤Æ
This is the draft I plan to use when someone asks what I do:
āI help small business owners increase their sales by setting up a simple WhatsApp funnel that works even if you donāt have tech skills.ā
Does it sound clear? Would YOU be interested if you got this message?
Be honest - I can take it š
Itās actually good, but I feel āsmall business ownersā might be too broad. Maybe narrow it down to the kind of people youāve helped or want to attract?
I like it - simple and to the point. But maybe say āboost sales using WhatsAppā instead of āa WhatsApp funnelā? Some people donāt know what a funnel is.
This is solid! Iād just swap āincrease salesā with something more specific like ādouble their monthly ordersā if youāve done that before.
The āeven if you donāt have tech skillsā part is fire š„ That line alone would make people feel itās for them.
Looks good! One thing though - if this is for WhatsApp, maybe make it sound more like a message youād actually send in chat. Less formal maybe?
I think itās solid overall. Maybe test two versions and see which one gets more replies. Sometimes itās not about what sounds best - itās what works.
Love the idea, but Iād cut down the sentence a bit. WhatsApp people skim a lot. Try something like:
āI help biz owners make more sales using simple WhatsApp chats - no tech needed.ā
Quick and punchy ā
Bro this is way better than what Iāve been sending š I literally say āI do online marketingā š¤¦āāļø. Yours is 100x clearer.